Page 9! Late!

This is another page that was not in the original number one.

One of the things I wasn’t too keen on in the first first issue was what I call character stuff. Character stuff is where we see the hero doing every day ordinary things. Here, we see Nightstik building a model. Another bit of feedback I received on the first issue is that Nightstik didn’t sound like the kid. Nightstik is a kid in an adult body. I have attempted to rectify that.

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