So, a bit of advice I received at this year’s ECCC was to “make a thing.” So I decided to gather all of my pages into a simple publisher file to see what that would look like. Low and behold, I discovered that I got off on my pagination because of an added two page spread that I roughed out while I was in Montana last June. I didn’t have any of my gear with me when I laid it out. This would be pages 23-24. I had some other character stuff with the guards that I had cut because I thought I no longer need that stuff. Well, as it turned out. I DID. Here is the NEW page 21.
Enjoy!